Reviewing Your Answer
On their official rubric, the TOEFL graders are looking for three things:
- Delivery: how fluid and natural your speech sounds
- Language use: how correct your grammar and syntax is
- Topic development: how well you answer the question
You aren't graded on which side of the prompt you pick; it doesn't matter at all. So now, let's go through your spoken answer to see how well you stacked up against the categories in the rubric. The prompt for this task was: 'Some people would rather go to live concerts, but other people prefer to listen to music at home. Which do you like better, and why?'
During the first 15 seconds of brainstorming, your job was to pick one side of the question. Again, it doesn't matter at all which side you pick. Just choose one. For the sake of example, we'll argue for listening to music at home. Once you've chosen a side of the argument, you've established what your main point is going to be. Now you need to brainstorm one or two quick reasons to support your position. Some reasons for this question could be:
- At home, you can listen to music whenever you want; you don't have to wait for a concert.
- Concerts can be really loud and even hurt your ears; at home, you can turn the volume down.
- Driving to a concert is a pain in the neck when you could just turn on your MP3 player instead.
- Sound quality at concerts is often bad, so you can actually hear the song better at home.
You might also have other reasons. There are no right or wrong reasons, provided they back up your argument. You should be able to fit each reason into a sentence like this: I argue that (whichever side of the prompt you picked) because (reason).
Now take a minute to listen through your spoken response again. Can you clearly identify reasons why you chose the position you did? Pause the video now and listen through your response.
Next, think about your response from the perspective of grammar. Listen through it again and make a note of any of the following:
- Long pauses
- Repeating the same word multiple times in a row
- Sentences that are hard to understand when you listen to them
- Grammar or syntax mistakes
If you notice anything, write it down so you can work on it later.