Sample Paragraph
Let's take a look a sample paragraph that might be in need of some grammatical first aid:
I am a big fan of the Seattle Seahawks. They are amazing. They have won the Super bowl. They have very good players. My favorite player is quarterback Matt Hasselbeck. The Seahawks have an incredible stadium in Seattle, WA. The stadium is called CenturyLink Field. It can hold 67,000 people. The stadium is an important part of downtown Seattle. There are many buildings in downtown Seattle. The tallest building in Seattle is the Columbia Center. I have been to the top of the Columbia Center. The view is amazing!
Wow! There's a lot going on in that one paragraph. The paragraph has three main ideas. Let's look at the first one:
I am a big fan of the Seattle Seahawks. They are amazing. They have won the Super bowl. They have very good players. My favorite player is quarterback Matt Hasselbeck. Here, the main idea is the Seattle Seahawks.
Now, let's take a look at the second main idea:
The Seahawks have an incredible stadium in Seattle, WA. The stadium is called CenturyLink Field. It can hold 67,000 people. The stadium is an important part of downtown Seattle. The main idea here is the CenturyLink Field stadium.
Now, how about the third main idea:
There are many buildings in downtown Seattle. The tallest building in Seattle is the Columbia Center. I have been to the top of the Columbia Center. The view is amazing! Here the main idea is the Columbia Center.
While each of these paragraphs could be clearer, each one is based upon a main idea rather than several main ideas. Many writers are guilty of this mistake at one time or another. When you're writing and good ideas are coming out of your head, it's easy to forget that the reader can get lost.