Achieving Unity in Body Paragraphs
Unity concepts s the joining of things together and so that is the case in building essay. We should focused on the interconnection of paragraphs while keep sticking to the main claim. So. For this unity creation avoid using vague ideas. Don’t try to drift from thesis build in advance.
For example:
If you are writing the essay about the banning of drugs so you might explain that man who learn to care himself well when they're young are energetic in their old age. They are able to save them from destitution in their dotage. Moreover, they tend to become more appreciative for their fitness. Rather than writing that drugs are collected from forest’s herbs and are made in industries.
So, jot down your last point related to your main idea in a detoured way.
Achieving Coherence in Body Paragraphs
In order to get coordination in a paragraph, you should present clear and logical ideas along with a rhythm among these ideas. So, flow in essay is much considered as it made your reader capable of developing understanding. Transition helps you to develop such coherence.
For example:
Let consider that you are writing a body paragraph on the premises that government should ban the drugs in country. So to present it in a logical and coherent way relate it to some example. Let you can give the example of drugs destruction in some other country where people had lose their life just because of the ample use of drugs.
So, for great coordination start with main point in a logical order that drugs should be banned and then moving with a chronological, clear order. You could explain that in some other country people had lose their life just because of the ample use of drugs. Then, you might explain that man who learn to care himself well when they're young are energetic in their old age.
In this way you would achieve the coordination in your essay.
Lesson Summary
Some essays come across like waking nightmares for the teachers who read them. But you can keep the body paragraphs in your essay from being a horrifying mess by keeping three basic principles in mind.
We have learnt that an essay would be seemed vague if it lacks connection, development and coherence. So, to overcome these following are important:
- Well-developed body paragraphs that use supporting details and examples must be written.
- Coherent body paragraphs that feature clear, logical sentences should be presented.
- Relate your idea with some past incident or example in order to build correct transitional connection.
By following the above techniques you would be able to develop a great essay and secure maximum score.
Learning Outcomes
Now you are able to:
- Identify the causes that make an vague or unclear
- Stand with the main point throughout the essay.
- Generalize the unity and coordination within an essay
- Form an essay in a logical order