Road Maps
Just like the early ages when man used paper maps or sign boards to reach their destination instead of GPS, your paper reader never bother to search the connection of your essay’s passages own his own. Rather he demands you to clearly take him from point A to point B. So, you are advised to build the argument in your introductory paragraph and then move from passage to passage in a rhythm that your one passage seems to be connected with previous and in this way reach to conclusion. Avoid the long jumps from paragraph to paragraph. So, transition are used when you are going to put forward new ideas or shift to another aspect. So, reach to conclusion by building a clear path throughout your essay in a concise manner.
Here we will discuss the use of transitions between different aspects.
Transitions between Sentences
As we know transitions are words and phrases that enables the writer to shift from one idea to the next.
So it’s used in sentence also. Here we have an example.
‘Team A consist of players aged 20 and above. Eighteen-year-olds may enter with a valid ID’
So, it is difficult to digest the above sentences structure. So, we will add transition to build connections. So, we will use however to make it sensible.
‘Team A consist of players aged 20 and above. However, eighteen-year-olds may enter with a valid ID’
Thus, this sentence is now easy to read after using transition.
Transitions within Paragraphs
Let's take this concept a step further. We graduate from the individual sentence to look at the relationship between several sentences in a paragraph. Follow along as I read:
‘Amazon.com, online market, reach a desired goal in bringing quality products to customers via Internet. Its success secret is to create ease for customer by making them capable of shopping on a single click. It has developed the secure payment method and delivery of products at customer’s residence. This market has modernize the lives of people’
The above paragraph is somewhat wrong as the main idea is same throughout but writing is marked by abrupt transitions and difficult to read. Let’s refine it by adding proper transitions.
So, let’s add “moreover” after 2nd sentence and “Of all” at the beginning of last sentence to reach our goal and made the writing readable.
‘Amazon.com, online market, reach a desired goal in bringing quality products to customers via Internet. Its success secret is to create ease for customer by making them capable of shopping on a single click. Moreover, it has developed the secure payment method and delivery of products at customer’s residence. Of all, this market has modernize the lives of people’
So, without disturbing he main idea we have made the paragraph much more logical.